Question

【題目】書面表達

介紹“愚公移山”的故事。（80詞左右）

Once upon a time, ___________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Once upon a time,there was a very old man called Yu Gong.There were two mountains near his house.They were so high and big that it took a long time to walk to the other side.Yu Gong told his family that they should all help him to move the mountains.And he said they could put the earth and stone into the sea because it's big enough to hold everything.So they all started digging the next day.Yu Gong and his family began to move some of the earth and stone to the sea.One day,a man saw Yu Gong and his children when they were working on moving the mountains.He told Yu Gong that he could never do it because he was old and weak.As soon as the man finished talking,Yu Gong said that his family could continue to move the mountains after he died.His family would live and grow,but the mountains could not get bigger.So Yu Gong and his family kept on digging day after day and year after year.Finally,a god was so moved that he sent two gods to move the mountains away.

This story reminds us that we can never know what's possible unless we try to make it happen.

【解析】

話題作文寫出的句子要達意、完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動詞的形式要有根有據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗龃_切反映內(nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時態(tài)，注意提供的觀點、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡。英語作文，要忠實于材料，不必擴展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯句。