Question

【題目】初中生活就要結(jié)束，暑假即將到來。請以“My summer vacation plan”為題，寫一篇100詞左右的英語短文，談?wù)勀阍谑钇谧x書、鍛煉身體、旅游、幫父母做家務(wù)等方面的計(jì)劃。

注意：l．可選擇一個(gè)或幾個(gè)方面來寫,也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地區(qū)、學(xué)校及人名.

My summer vacation plan

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Answer 1

【答案】My summer vacation plan

Summer vacation is coming. I have planned it for a long time.

First, I want to improve myself. I think reading is a good way for my improvement. I am eager to look through some foreign books, such as Treasure Island, Tom Sawyer,Oliver Twist and so on.

Second, being healthy is very important for me.I'll join a football club and train there. Also, I'll go swimming with my best friends if I have time.

Then, traveling is necessary. I dream to visit Paris to see Eiffel Tower for long. It's a good chance for me. I can't miss it.

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，介紹自己的假期計(jì)劃。題目中給出的材料較為簡略，動(dòng)筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)主題組織材料，確定寫作內(nèi)容，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)， 用第一人稱來書寫。注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，做到語句通順。為了使意思更加連貫可適當(dāng)使用連接詞。還要注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)和想法。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練,如:本文中for a long time，look through，such as，and so on，first，second，then等詞（組）的恰當(dāng)使用。采用了豐富的句型，比如：Second, being healthy is very important for me.動(dòng)名詞作主語; if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；I think賓語從句等多種句式交替運(yùn)用，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。