Question

【題目】【廣東省2015年中考英語(yǔ)試題】書(shū)面表達(dá)（15分） 每年夏天，溺水事故頻發(fā)。 請(qǐng)你就此寫(xiě)一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

內(nèi)容包括：

1.我們應(yīng)該如何防止此類(lèi)事故發(fā)生？（兩點(diǎn)建議）

2.如果看到有人落水，我們應(yīng)該如何施救？

3.呼吁同學(xué)們熱愛(ài)生命，注意安全。

作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出現(xiàn)的學(xué)校真實(shí)姓名。

2.語(yǔ)句連貫，詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右。作文的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)，也不必抄寫(xiě)在答題卡上。

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?

Answer 1

【答案】

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry.

If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.

Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)的作文。根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容主要寫(xiě)兩點(diǎn)關(guān)于如何防止溺水的建議，發(fā)現(xiàn)落水，我們應(yīng)該怎么做，對(duì)人們發(fā)出注意安全的呼吁。我們主要用到提建議的句式：we should/ had better/we can 等等。注意if條件狀語(yǔ)從句的應(yīng)用。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文內(nèi)容切題，意思連貫，表達(dá)清楚、完整。詞匯和句型句式運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)。如提建議的句式：In my opinion, we shouldn’t go…, we had better not swim….條件狀語(yǔ)從句等。