Question

【題目】

時間	2015年4月18日，星期天; 天氣晴朗
目的地	山海關(guān)
抵達方式	乘公車
出發(fā)時間	上午七點
到達時間	上午九點
活動內(nèi)容	上午：在沙灘上做游戲，游泳，在飯店吃午飯 下午：參觀博物館，照相
返回時間	下午五點半

要求：1.包含表中所有的信息并寫出自己的感受，內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮，語義連貫。

2.詞數(shù)：約70個單詞。

參考詞匯：a school trip; Shanhaiguan; excited; sand; restaurant(餐館); take photos

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Answer 1

【答案】It was Sunday on April 18, 2015. It was sunny. We had a school trip to Shanhaiguan. We were very excited. We started on the school bus at 7:00 am. After two hours’ ride, we arrived there at nine. We played games on the sand and swam in the sea happily. After that, we had lunch in a restaurant. In the afternoon, we visited the science museum, and took many photos there. We were very happy. At half past five, we got home.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我們?nèi)ド胶ｊP(guān)的一次旅行。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過去時，人稱為第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：It was……，We were……，We played games……，we had lunch……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。