Question

【題目】（題文）書面表達(dá)

課外活動(dòng)可以讓我們?cè)鲩L知識(shí)，發(fā)展智力，開闊視野和塑造性格。許多學(xué)校創(chuàng)造性地開展了課外活動(dòng)，如朗誦、唱歌、講故事、演話劇、辦刊物以及舉辦各種體育活動(dòng)等。

最近，某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開設(shè)了“After-class Activities”的欄目。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，為該欄目寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。

1.你校開展課外活動(dòng)的情況；

2.你參加過的課外活動(dòng)及給你帶來的益處；

3.為同學(xué)選擇課外活動(dòng)或?yàn)閷W(xué)校開設(shè)課外活動(dòng)提出建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù) 80 以上；

2.文中不得提及具體人名、校名及地名；

3.稿件的開頭已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。

After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools.

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Answer 1

【答案】After-class Activities

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming more and more popular in junior schools. In our school there are various kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports. We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading are my favorites which do me lots of good. Besides building my body and improving my skills, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

Here I have some suggestions. To students, we’d better choose the activities which interest us and suit us; Schools should organize more activities for students and leave more time for activities by giving us less homework.

Dear friends, please actively take part in after-activities, which will not only make your school life colorful, but also improve your learning.

【解析】

這篇作文要求寫一篇英文稿件，并鼓勵(lì)同學(xué)們積極參 加課外活動(dòng)。首先應(yīng)注意在短文中要包括題目中給出的所有信息，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，并注意表達(dá)的層次和條理。其次要注意使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)和人稱，通過分析可知，這篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，謂語動(dòng)詞用原形，特別要注意如果主語是第三人稱單數(shù)的時(shí)候，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要變化，這是一個(gè)寫作的難點(diǎn)。最后要注意英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，英語句式與漢語在語序和詞性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語。應(yīng)從句子整體考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和句型來表達(dá)，語法規(guī)范。還應(yīng)使用一些較好的句型或者短語，增強(qiáng)文章的表現(xiàn)力。