Question

【題目】在竟爭激烈的當今社會, 作為一名中學生, 承受著來自生活和學習等多方面的壓力。請你以 How to Reduce the Pressure為題, 談一談你是怎樣減緩壓力的。

要求： 1.詞數(shù)： 80詞左右。

2.字跡工整，語言流暢，表達準確，邏輯清晰。

3.文章內(nèi)容可適當發(fā)揮。

How to Reduce the Pressure

Answer 1

【答案】

How to Reduce the Pressure

Nowadays, we are under too much pressure. It's not good for our development.

In order to reduce the pressure, I often do some sports, such as running, swimming and playing basketball. I also hang out with my friends when I fee1 stressed. Listening to music is a good way for me to relax, especially light music and pop songs. It's very helpful to talk with my friends or my parents. They can understand me better

These ways of relaxation help me a lot. Now I am more confident and do better than before.

【解析】

試題分析：本題要求談一談怎樣減緩生活和學習等方面的壓力。短文可以從社會現(xiàn)狀、減壓的重要性、如何積極地減壓等方面進行寫作。要做到語言流暢，表達準確，邏輯清晰。短文用第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，可以多用一些帶有情態(tài)動詞的句子來幫助表達。

寫作亮點：短文層次清楚，條理清晰。短文第一段擺明現(xiàn)象：壓力大，說明影響：不利于我們成長，語言簡捷精煉；第二段具體講述如何減壓，突出短文中心和重點；其中的動名詞短語用得很準確，不定式作主語結(jié)構(gòu)運用恰當；第三段簡短結(jié)尾：這些放松的方式幫助我很大，現(xiàn)在我更自信了，比以前做得更好了。再次表明作者觀點：壓力太大不好，減壓有益健康成長。揭示中心，突出主題。