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【題目】書面表達(dá)

初中畢業(yè)之際,校報(bào)“英語角”欄目向同學(xué)們征集畢業(yè)典禮活動計(jì)劃。假定你是李華,請根據(jù)要點(diǎn)寫一封信,提出你的建議。

寫作要點(diǎn):

畢業(yè)典禮
時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)	7月1日,學(xué)校報(bào)告廳
三項(xiàng)活動	1.校長講話送祝福
	2.學(xué)生發(fā)言談感恩
	3.……

寫作要求:1.80詞左右(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));

2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名,否則不得分;

3.寫作要點(diǎn)都必須用上,緊扣主題,適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

參考詞匯:畢業(yè)典禮graduation ceremony;前進(jìn)中學(xué)Qianjin Middle School;學(xué)校報(bào)告廳the school hall。

Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the graduation ceremony.

This is what we will do.I hope you will choose my plan.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the graduation ceremony.The ceremony will be held in our school hall on July 1st.I have planned three activities for it.First of all,we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future.After that,one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us.In the end,some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.

This is what we will do.I hope you will choose my plan.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，介紹畢業(yè)典禮活動計(jì)劃。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：The ceremony will……，one of the students will read……，some pictures will be shown to……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。