Question

【題目】初中三年,你的生活中有很多人幫助過你.你最想感謝的人是誰?他/她是個什么樣的人?你為什么要感謝他/她?你有什么想對他/她說的嗎?請你以此為題,寫一篇文章.

提示:

1.Who is he/she?

2.What is he/she like?

3.Why do you want to thank him/her?

4.What do you want to say?

要求:

1.參考提示內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.語句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;

3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息;

4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞(開頭已給出,但不計入總詞數(shù)).

During my junior high school life,the most memorable person is

Answer 1

【答案】During my junior high school life,the most memorable person is Ms. Wang. Ms. Wang is my English teacher. She is kind and friendly. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. In class, she teaches us how to learn English well. While after class, she talks with us about her favorite pop stars happily. She is also hardworking. She always makes her class so interesting that I like to have her class a lot. What’s more, she is patient. If I have some problems with English study, she will explain them to me again and again. Till I can solve them on my own. Little by little, my English has made much progress. So I thank her very much.
Soon, I will leave this school, I think I will remember her forever.

【解析】本文需要對初中三年給予你幫助的人說謝謝，并闡述他是如何幫助你的。內(nèi)容需包括，他是誰，他怎么樣，為什么感謝他，有什么話要對他說，四個部分。人稱使用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。文章內(nèi)容全面，銜接得當(dāng)，用了恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，What’s more, So。也用了比較復(fù)雜的句型，各種狀語從句如If I have some problems with English study, she will explain them to me again and again. 是一篇優(yōu)秀的范文。