Question

【題目】【2016湖北隨州】書面表達

目前，家長開車接送孩子上學已經(jīng)成為一個普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對此做法褒貶不一，家長們也有自己的看法。

觀點1：省時；安全；提供更多與孩子交流的機會。

觀點2：學校周圍更擁擠；最近發(fā)生了幾起交通事故；污染的空氣對身體有不良影響。

你的觀點：（必須用2至3句話作適當發(fā)揮）

注意：1．文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，要求語句通順，意思連貫；

2．詞數(shù)：80詞左右；（文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）

3．文中不得提及具體人名、校名及地名。

Nowadays it’s common for parents to drive their children to school and back home, which has caused a heated discussion.

Some parents think

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Nowadays it’s common for parents to drive their children to school and back home,which has caused a heated discussion.

Some parents think it saves time. It is very safe. And it offers more chances to communicate with their children . So they can get along well with their children.

However, other parents think it’s more crowded around schools. There have been several traffic accidents recently. And the polluted air is bad for our health.

I think we should do our things by ourselves. We can go to school by bus or on foot. And it can also help reduce pollution.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，對家長開車接送孩子上學這一現(xiàn)象的討論，并闡述自己的觀點。結合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如：It is...，So they can ...，However, other parents think it’s...，There have been ...，I think....，We can...等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系，完整地表達出提綱中所要求內(nèi)容。

寫作亮點：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了對家長開車接送孩子上學這一現(xiàn)象進行討論，接下來介紹贊同這個行為和反對這一行為的原因，最后表達自己的觀點。此處offer sth to sb,communicate with,get along well with, be bad for, by oneself, go to school, by bus, on foot,help do sth等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。