Question

【題目】B某雜志社舉辦“我愉快的夏令營”征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你寫一篇短文參加這次活動(dòng)。短文內(nèi)容如下：去年夏天，你和父母去了海邊，玩沙子、游泳，中午吃海鮮；下午放風(fēng)箏；晚上回去，很累，但很高興。

要求：詞數(shù)：60詞左右�？梢赃m當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不能按原文翻譯。

有可能用到的詞：海濱：seaside 玩沙子：play with sand 海鮮：seafood 友好：friendly 有益的：helpful：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】My happy summer camp

Last summer my parents and I went to the seaside. We played with sand on the beach, and we swam in the sea. How happily we play! At noon we had seafood for lunch. It is delicious. In the afternoon we flew kites. In the evening we went back. We were tired but happy. The people in the camp were friendly. I think the summer camp is helpful to us and we should go on a summer camp.

【解析】去年夏天，我和父母去了海邊the seaside，玩沙子played with sand、游泳，中午吃海鮮seafood for lunch；下午放風(fēng)箏flew kites；晚上回去，很累，但很高興be tired but happy。

注意句子的完整性，時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用，句子之間的銜接和踩點(diǎn)。