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【題目】題目：王濤沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，你打算怎么幫他呢?請用下面所給的提示詞寫一篇不少于60---80字的短文。字跡工整，語言流暢。

提示詞：give up ，concentrate on（集中于），be (become)interested in ，make great progress

How to help Wang Tao

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Answer 1

【答案】How to help Wang Tao

Wang Tao spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。王濤沉迷于電腦游戲中，影響了學(xué)習(xí)。作為他的好朋友，要求寫一篇短文來說明你你打算怎么幫他。本文時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱主要是第一人稱輔以第三人稱。寫作時(shí)注意上下文要聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。為了使行文流暢、上下文銜接自然，寫作時(shí)要靈活運(yùn)用連接詞或過渡語言，使文章有一定的連貫性。要注意語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯(cuò)誤；要使用自己有把握的句式、單詞，詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，避免句式單一。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。