Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

下周你們班將召開一次題為“互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的利弊”的主題班會。一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)好處多；一些同學(xué)認(rèn)為互聯(lián)網(wǎng)不好。請以The Internet 為題，寫一篇短文，談?wù)劵ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)的利弊以及我們應(yīng)該怎樣正確對待它。（80字左右）

提示詞：shopping, information, music, watch TV, however, hurt, money, spend, carefully

The Internet

The Internet makes our lives more interesting. _______________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Internet makes our lives more interesting. We can do some shopping without leaving our houses. We can use the Internet for looking for job or selling things. We can watch movies, listen to music and write e-mails on the Internet. However ,some people use the Internet to hurt others and try to get money by cheating. Some young people usually spend too much time playing games and so on..

The Internet can change our lives for the better, but we should use it carefully.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

【亮點說明】這篇短文簡潔明了，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)了文中給出的信息。并使用了makes our lives more interesting, do some shopping without leaving our houses. use the Internet for looking for job or selling things However spend too much time playing等短語。在學(xué)習(xí)中要注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。