Question

13．母愛情深，母愛無價；學(xué)會感恩，學(xué)會回報．在母親節(jié)來臨之際，請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇以"My mother"為題目的英語作文，介紹你可親可愛的媽媽．
要點：
1．年齡，身高，發(fā)型等外貌特征．
2．個性品質(zhì)（參考詞匯：kind，friendly，patient，honest，get on well with…）
3．互動（I help my mom to…/she won't get angry if I…/she is happy if…）
4．感情表達（I love…and I give her…/she works so hard that I…）
要求：
1．文章必須涵蓋所有內(nèi)容要點，參考詞匯可以選擇運用．
2．此題具有開放性可以圍繞語言要點適當發(fā)揮．
3．詞數(shù)80詞左右，開頭結(jié)尾已給出不計入總字數(shù)．
My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．無論我學(xué)習上需要什么她都給我買，盡管她沒有多少錢．
 whatever 引導(dǎo)名詞性從句．even though 盡管
句型二：
I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．我會攢錢買漂亮的衣服讓她看起來年輕．
動詞不定式表目的，make her look+形容詞，使她看起來怎么樣．

解答 My mother
We need love．We also need to love．The person I love most is my mother．My mother is 41 years old．She is of medium build with long black hair．（外貌）She is friendly．She is a history teacher in a middle school．She likes dancing．She can cook delicious food．（愛好）
She did a lot for me when I was a child．She bought whatever I needed for my study，even though she didn't have much money．【高分句型一】She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend．She cooked delicious and healthy food for me．（互動）
When I grow up，I will do what I can to make my mother happy．I will find a good job after I graduate from college．I'll save money and buy beautiful clothes to make her look still young．【高分句型二】I'll take her to wonderful sights around China．Most importantly，I will stay with her when I have free time．That's what she wants most，I think．（愿望）

點評 根據(jù)提示進行書面表達，能夠圍繞主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等，清楚連貫地表達自己的思想，進而完成寫作任務(wù)．