Question

【題目】親愛的同學們, 健康是一個人的首要財富。擁有健康的身體, 才能保證良好的學習狀態(tài)。有些同學由于平時不注意照顧自己的身體, 而導致健康出現(xiàn)了一些問題。想要擁有健康的身體, 需要大家在日常生活中多加注意。請你結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷談?wù)勅绾伪３稚眢w健康。內(nèi)容須包含以下要點：

要求: 1. 詞數(shù)80詞左右；

2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名。

Answer 1

【答案】Health is the most precious treasure in our lives. It is based on what we can do, such as studying, working and so on.

I used to pay little attention to my health. I ate lots of junk food and seldom took exercise. As a result, I was in poor health and got tired easily. So I decided to change my lifestyle. After giving up junk food and playing more sports, I become healthier and healthier.

Then how can we stay healthy?First, doing sports is necessary. We can take part in outdoor activities in our free time. Second, we should eat meals on time, and eat more healthy food, such as apples, vegetables but less junk food. Besides, keeping a good mood and having enough sleep are also important. I hope all of us can be healthy.

【解析】

這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真說讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上，結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時及一般過去時態(tài)進行敘述，注意主謂一致及時間狀語與時態(tài)的一致問題。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。