Question

書(shū)面表達(dá)。

每個(gè)人都有自己的夢(mèng)想，在你的班級(jí)小組里，李明想成為一名老師，王林想成為一名工程師，李東想成為一名醫(yī)生，你的夢(mèng)想是什么呢？

注意：1. 文章必須包含表格所提供的主要信息，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 詞數(shù)：70詞左右。標(biāo)題和開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Our dreams	1	Everyone has his own dream.
2	Li  Ming is going to… Wang  Lin… Li  Dong…
3	1 want to be… We will study hard for…

 

Our dreams

Everyone has his own dream.                                            ___       

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                     

                                                                                    

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Everyone has his own dream .There are four students in our group . They are Li Ming, Wang Lin, Li Dong and I .We are talking about our future .Li Ming is going to be a teacher when he grows up .Wang Lin is going to be an engineer .He wants to fix computers and fridges for us .Li Dong is going to be a doctor .He will help the sick people .And I want to be a policeman in the future .We will study hard for our dreams.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的寫(xiě)作不難，首先介紹我們小組有四個(gè)同學(xué)There are four students in our group分別討論了自己的未來(lái)talk about our future，然后分別介紹四個(gè)同學(xué)的夢(mèng)想be a teacher，be an engineer，be a doctor，be a policeman這樣一氣呵成，再用一句話進(jìn)行擴(kuò)展，說(shuō)明成為心目中的人物后會(huì)做什么，最后表明我們都會(huì)為我們的夢(mèng)想奮斗的We will study hard for our dreams.

考點(diǎn)：提綱類(lèi)寫(xiě)作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文難度不大，寫(xiě)作條理性要把握好，對(duì)于初一的作文，不要求有很華美的詞語(yǔ)，重在培養(yǎng)自己連詞成句的能力，避免中式英文。在平時(shí)的練習(xí)中要多去背誦范文，對(duì)表達(dá)好的句子，短語(yǔ)要進(jìn)行積累，并默寫(xiě)，考試前再集中看一下，這樣做到有備無(wú)患。