Question

【題目】寫作

近年來，城市空氣污染越來越嚴(yán)重，各大城市相繼出現(xiàn)了霧霾天氣（hazy weather），請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)環(huán)境的文章。

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1、霧霾成因：①汽車使用增加；②工廠污染嚴(yán)重；③樹林大量砍伐

2、建議辦法：①盡量少用私家車，選用公共交通工具、步行或騎自行車；

②(自擬1—2條)

寫作要求：

4. 詞數(shù)80左右。2、短文必須包含所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

These years , air pollution is getting worse and worse in big cities .

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Answer 1

【答案】

Now cars are increasing very fast. Factories are continuing polluting the air. Trees are being cut down. So the hazy weather is becoming more and more serious. It’s time for us to do something to protect the environment.

First of all, we’d better not travel by car unless it’s necessary. We can take the bus or the subway, walk or ride a bike if we don’t go far away. We can also set up a volunteer club and ask more people to join it. We can plant more trees, give the government advice to stop the factories polluting the air and water.

In a word, protecting the environment is to protect ourselves. It’s our duty to make it.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，要包括霧霾的成因、害處以及解決辦法，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，給出你的建議。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文用正確的語句表達(dá)了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。最后的句子protecting the environment is to protect ourselves. It’s our duty to make it.是文章的精華所在。