Question

18．海南自改革開放以來發(fā)展非常迅速．各方面發(fā)生了翻天覆地的變化，人們的生活水平也有了很大的提高．具體表現(xiàn)在以下幾個方面：
in the past：roads，narrow； houses，small，dark； living conditions，hard；communications，simple，slow
nowadays：wide，buildings，tall，bright； comfortable； quick，easy．
要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；
2．必須包含所給內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)拓展；
3．詞數(shù)70左右．（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）
Hainan has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up．Great changes have taken place here．In the past．
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Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more ring roads have appeared and buildings are becoming taller and brighter越來越多的環(huán)形路出現(xiàn)，房子也變得更高更明亮．
比較級+and+比較級  越來越…
【高分句型二】
Thanks to the government，Hainan is becoming better and better．多虧了政府，海南變得越來越好了．
thanks to …多虧…

解答 Hainan has developed rapidly since the reform and opening-up．Great changes have taken place here．In the past，the roads were narrow，the houses were small and dark．The living conditions in the city were hard．The communications are simple and low．（過去）
Now  it has developed rapidly．More and more ring roads have appeared and buildings are becoming taller and brighter．【高分句型一】people's living conditiongs have improved a lot．It‘s more comfortable．The communications are quick and easy．（現(xiàn)在）
Thanks to the government，Hainan is becoming better and better．【高分句型二】

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