Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是張明,你是學(xué)校“環(huán)保俱樂部” (Saving the Environment Club) 的志愿者。上周六，你們俱樂部組織了志愿者活動。請給你的筆友Ben寫一封電子郵件,向他介紹這次活動的情況,并談?wù)勀銓χ驹刚吖ぷ鞯目捶?/span>，并注意書信格式。80詞左右.

其內(nèi)容包括：

1、介紹自己是環(huán)保俱樂部的自愿者。

2、活動內(nèi)容有：張貼海報(bào)、分發(fā)廣告、打掃街道、打掃公園等。

3、當(dāng)我們完成所有工作后都感覺很累，但卻覺得很快樂,很有成就感。

4、我認(rèn)為做一名志愿者非常不錯(cuò)。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Ben,

I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work with other volunteers.

Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.

I think it's fantastic to be a volunteer.

What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!

Yours,

Zhang Ming

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者給你的筆友Ben寫一封電子郵件,向他介紹這次活動的情況,并談?wù)勀銓χ驹刚吖ぷ鞯目捶?/span>，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。