Question

13．下面是全球最年輕的億萬富翁，被稱為"蓋茨第二"的馬克•扎克伯格（Mark）的個人簡歷，請根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，為英文雜志寫一篇文章，要求如下：
1）根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，介紹其履歷，可適當發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯．
2）談談你對成功的看法．
3）詞數(shù)80-100

馬克•扎克伯格 Mark Elliot Zuckerberg	1984年出生于美國．
	10歲的時候他得到了第一臺電腦，從此將大把的時間都花在了上面．
	高中時，他為學校設計了一款MP3．
	在讀大學期間，扎克伯格就和兩位室友一起，建立了一個名為facebook的社交網(wǎng)站．
	對成功的看法：hard-working，never give up …

參考詞匯：be born；high school；design；university；set up；roommate
社交網(wǎng)站 social network site
Mark Elliot Zuckerberg，the youngest billionaire in the world，was regarded as the second Bill Gates．Do you want to know something about him？I'd like to share his story with you．Mark was born in 1982 in America．He was very interested in computer when he was only a little boy．At the age of ten，Mark got his first computer．He spent plenty of time on the computer from then on．When he was a student in high school，he designed an MP3 for his school．During his time in the university，he set up a social network site called facebook with two of his roommates．
As for my opinion of success，I think anyone who wants to be successful must be hard-working．Don't give up whenever you have difficulties．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是介紹馬克•扎克伯格并談談你對成功的看法．時態(tài)主要為一般過去時和一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1.1984年出生于美國．
2.10歲的時候他得到了第一臺電腦，從此將大把的時間都花在了上面．
3．高中時，他為學校設計了一款MP3．
5．在讀大學期間，扎克伯格就和兩位室友一起，建立了一個名為facebook的社交網(wǎng)站．
6．對成功的看法：hard-working，never give up …
常用到的重點短語：
be born 出生
be interested in 對…感興趣
at the age of …在…歲的時候
spend+時間+on sth 花時間做某事
give up 放棄
【高分句型】
1．①During his time in the university，he②set up a social network site③called facebook with two of his roommates．
①during表示在…期間．
②set up建立
③過去分詞短語做后置定語，修飾network site．
2．①As for my opinion of success，I think②anyone ③who wants to be successful must be hard-working．
①As for my opinion of success至于我對成功地看法
②think后省略了引導詞that的賓語從句．
③who作為關(guān)系詞的定語從句，who作為從句的主語，修飾先行詞anyone．
3．Don't ①give up ②whenever you have difficulties．
①give up 放棄
②whenever無論什么時候，引導的讓步狀語從句

解答 Mark Elliot Zuckerberg，the youngest billionaire in the world，was regarded as the second Bill Gates．Do you want to know something about him？I'd like to share his story with you．Mark was born in 1984 in America．（1984年出生于美國）He was very interested in computer when he was only a little boy．At the age of ten，Mark got his first computer．He spent plenty of time on the computer from then on．（10歲的時候他得到了第一臺電腦，從此將大把的時間都花在了上面）When he was a student in high school，he designed an MP3 for his school．（高中時，他為學校設計了一款MP3． ）During his time in the university，he set up a social network site called facebook with two of his roommates．【高分句型】（在讀大學期間，扎克伯格就和兩位室友一起，建立了一個名為facebook的社交網(wǎng)站）
As for my opinion of success，I think anyone who wants to be successful must be hard-working．【高分句型】Don't give up whenever you have difficulties．【高分句型】（對成功的看法）

點評 本題是寫一篇給定材料的書面表達，主要是介紹馬克的個人簡歷，寫作時應注意主要使用單數(shù)第三人稱形式和一般過去時，內(nèi)容包括馬克的出生地，馬克在10歲，高中和大學期間所做的事，以及個人對馬克成功的看法，寫作時應注意時間的先后性和語言的準確性．