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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示，發(fā)揮想象，以“My Dream Home”為題寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。

內(nèi)容包括以下要點(diǎn)：

1. 一個(gè)靠近湖邊的新房子，有三層。有時(shí)在湖上劃船。房子周?chē)�有許多花和樹(shù)。

2. 遠(yuǎn)離市中心，空氣新鮮。房子前面有個(gè)大花園，早晨可以聽(tīng)到鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)，聞到花香。

3. 在頂樓有一個(gè)家庭影院。周末時(shí)想邀請(qǐng)朋友們來(lái)看電影。

4. 你的感想…….(適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)

要求：1．語(yǔ)句通順、語(yǔ)言規(guī)范。 2．書(shū)寫(xiě)工整、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)正確。3. 開(kāi)頭已給，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。

My Dream Home

Hello , everyone! Today I want to tell you about my dream home.

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Answer 1

【答案】

My dream home

Hello, everyone! Today I want to tell you about my dream home.

My dream home is a new house near a lake. It has three floors. Sometimes I row a boat on the lake.There are many flowers and trees around the house.

It is far away from the city center, so the air here is fresh. There is a big garden in front of my dream home. In the morning I can hear the birds sing and smell the flowers.

There’s a home cinema on the top floor. At weekends I would like to invite my friends to come and watch wonderful films.

It’s a wonderful place to live. It’s lucky enough for me to live in a house like this.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文叫小作者介紹自己夢(mèng)想中的家，小作者首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。小作者還必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不僅使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如It is far away from the city center, so the air here is fresh. There is a big garden in front of my dream home.等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。