Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是Xiao Li，根據(jù)表格的信息用英語寫一篇短文介紹你和你的朋友Xiao Hua的情況，不少于80詞。

Name	Age	From	Class	Grade	Look	Clothes
Xiao Li	12	Quanzhou	1	7	Tall, round face, big eyes	Yellow dress,
Xiao Hua	13	Xiamen	2	7	Short, wide mouth, small nose	Purple T-shirt,pink skirt

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My name is Xiao Li. I am a student. I am 12 years old. She is from Quanzhou. She is tall and she has a round face and big eyes. She like yellow dresses. She has a good friend. Her name is Xiao Hua. Xiao Hua is thirteen years old. She comes from Xiamen. She is short and she has a small mouth and a small nose. She likes purple T-shirt and pink skirt. They are in the same grade, but they are in different classes. Xiao Hua is in Class Two, Grade Seven. Xiao Li is in Class One. We often go to school together.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我和我的朋友。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：My /Her name is……，be good at及do well in等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意文后要表達(dá)自己的交友意愿。。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的朋友的名字，接下來介紹我們的共同點(diǎn)與不同之處，最后指出我們的擅長。此處用了 In some ways，a little more outgoing than，is good at ， am good at等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。