Question

請(qǐng)你以David的身份給Mary寫(xiě)一封信, 介紹你自己和你家人的情況。你可以談?wù)勊麄兊墓ぷ骱退麄兯�喜歡的食品。信的開(kāi)頭和末尾已經(jīng)給出。你需要用下面的提示詞: family, happy, teacher, doctor, fish, chicken, vegetables。要求60-70詞。

Dear Mary,

I’m David. I’m from England. _____________________________

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Yours,

David

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Dear Mary,

I’m David. I’m from England. I want to tell you about my family. Four people are in my family. They’re my mother, my father, my sister and I. My father is an English teacher. He likes fish very much. My mother is a doctor. She likes cooking. Chicken is her favorite food. My sister Julia and I are in the same school. We don’t like eating vegetables. But my parents tell us to eat vegetables. They are good for us. Look! We have a happy family.

Yours,

David

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求根據(jù)所給中文提示語(yǔ)，在60-70詞之內(nèi)介紹自己的家庭成員的工作和他們所喜歡的食品。 用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，主語(yǔ)是I/he/she/they，正確運(yùn)用be動(dòng)詞，like之類(lèi)的詞表達(dá)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文要點(diǎn)齊全、行文連貫。介紹了一家四口人（爸爸、媽媽、姐姐和我）的職業(yè)和所喜歡的食物。第三人稱單數(shù)做主語(yǔ)時(shí)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用單三形式，是學(xué)生的難點(diǎn)易錯(cuò)點(diǎn)，需要多多練習(xí)。be動(dòng)詞的形式也因?yàn)橹髡Z(yǔ)的改變而變化等。此外，like doing，the same，be good for也是本文的寫(xiě)作亮度。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。