Question

14．假如你是Jane，你的好友Mary在微博上說最近很累很不開心，而且很擔(dān)心即將到來的期末考試，請(qǐng)你在Mary的微博中回復(fù)，給她一些建議，使她振作起來．（注意：文中不能出現(xiàn)姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息）
提示：
（1）分析Mary 不開心的原因；
（2）給她一些建議使她減少壓力；
（3）給她美好的祝福．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，要求是假如你是Jane，你的好友Mary在微博上說最近很累很不開心，而且很擔(dān)心即將到來的期末考試，請(qǐng)你在Mary的微博中回復(fù)，給她一些建議，使她振作起來，寫作內(nèi)容應(yīng)該包括：1．分析她不開心的原因．2．給出幾條減壓的建議．3．送上祝福．因?yàn)檫@是一封回信，所以格式要注意，稱呼頂格寫，最后要有落款，人稱以第一人稱來寫．在寫建議的時(shí)候，可以用到Y(jié)ou can do…/You should do…等句式．

解答 Dear Mary，
　　Pressure is a serious problem in today's world．I know you are under too much pressure．You can't get on well with your
classmates； you may worry about your exams．
　　I'm always under pressure，too．My parents want me to be the top student in class．So they send me to all kinds of
training classes at weekends．
　　Last Monday evening，I had a talk with my mother．I told her I was not lazy．I really felt tired．I needed time to relax．
My mother agreed with me at last．So I think a conversation with your parents is necessary to solve the problem．
　  Less pressure，better life!Best wishes to you!
 Yours，
 Jane

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一篇以提綱提供情景的作文，寫作時(shí)稍顯要注意文章格式，這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要注意格式的正確性，并且要注意，文章必須覆蓋所提供的各個(gè)提綱的要點(diǎn)同時(shí)舒心的結(jié)尾一定要注意送上祝�；蚱谂危�使整篇短文意思連貫，表達(dá)流暢．