Question

【題目】書面表達

假如你搬到了一個新的街區(qū)，請寫信給你的好友Lucy向他她描述一下：1.你家在哪及怎么去你家。（使用方位介詞描述一下在什么街道上，附近有些什么標志性的建筑物等）2.介紹你新認識的鄰居家的好朋友Becky.(名字，性別，穿著，外貌，喜歡和她成為朋友的原因)。 文章必須包含上述內(nèi)容，且不少于70字。

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Dear Lucy,

I am glad to know that you will come to my home. My new home is 5 kilometers from our school.It is next to the police station on the Bridge Street. You can take No.1 Bus and get off at the police station. Then you walk along the street and you can see the supermarket.And my new home is behind it.I have a new friend here. Her name is Becky. She is a tall and thin boy. She often wears blue coat and black trousers. She likes reading books. We have the same hobby. So we often talk about our favorite books.We are good friends.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹給好友Lucy寫信介紹自己新家的地址以及鄰居家的好友Becky。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：I am glad to...，My new home is ...，She is ...,We are ...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系.

寫作亮點：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭很高興Lucy來自己的新家，接下來介紹我新家的位置和如何來我的新家，最后介紹鄰居家的好友Becky。此處be glad to, next to, get off, like doing sth, the same, talk about等這些詞組的運用也讓文章增色不少。