Question

15．親愛(ài)的同學(xué)們，快樂(lè)的初中生活即將結(jié)束．在這四年里，敬愛(ài)的老師們?yōu)槲覀兏冻隽诵难�與關(guān)懷．請(qǐng)為你最?lèi)?ài)的一位老師寫(xiě)一段畢業(yè)留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、他（她）給你的鼓勵(lì)和幫助以及你對(duì)他（她）最好的祝愿和思念之情等．
要求：1．可參考下圖所給提示詞，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校．
3．字?jǐn)?shù)要控制在80～100詞．

Dear teacher，
I'm leaving school，but I will never forget your love．You area tall and handsome man．You are kind to all of us．I can't forget the moment you talked to me，your smile，your sweet voice and your warm words．
After class，you often helped us with our study．When I was in trouble，you always encouraged me to have confidence．You are not only my teacher but also my friend．I'll often write to you and I'll come back to see you later on．
I wish you a happy，healthy life．
Your student．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．內(nèi)容在即將畢業(yè)之際，為你最?lèi)?ài)的一位老師寫(xiě)一段畢業(yè)留言：他（她）給你留下的深刻印象、他（她）給你的鼓勵(lì)和幫助以及你對(duì)他（她）最好的祝愿和思念之情等．時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般過(guò)去時(shí)．人稱(chēng)為第一人稱(chēng)和第二人稱(chēng)．要注意留言的格式．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)包括：1．老師留下的印象；2．老師的鼓勵(lì)和幫助；3．對(duì)老師的美好祝愿．常用的重點(diǎn)句型和短語(yǔ)：be kind to sb．，help sb．with sth．，encourage sb．to do sth．，not only…but also…，write to sb等．

解答 Dear teacher，
I'm leaving school，but I will never forget your love．You are a tall and handsome man．You are kind to all of us．I can't forget the moment you talked to me，your smile，your sweet voice and your warm words．
After class，you often helped us with our study．When I was in trouble，you always encouraged me to have confidence．You are not only my teacher but also my friend．I'll often write to you and I'll come back to see you later on．
I wish you a happy，healthy life．
Your student

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇圖畫(huà)作文．根據(jù)該題目要求，圖畫(huà)中給出的提示詞可作為參考，也可自己適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．考生在構(gòu)思作文時(shí)需根據(jù)題干及圖畫(huà)中提示，圍繞畢業(yè)在即向老師表達(dá)自己的感激之情展開(kāi)作文，所發(fā)揮內(nèi)容也應(yīng)與主題相關(guān)，切忌跑題．作文時(shí)不要將圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容生硬地搬到作文里，而是在材料的基礎(chǔ)上，合理巧妙地構(gòu)思全文，充分表現(xiàn)主題的過(guò)程．