Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

日常生活中，我們有多種多樣的出行方式，請說一說：你心目中最好的出行方式是什么？請以“The Best Way for Me to Go to School”為題寫一篇短文。不少于60詞。

The Best Way for Me to Go to School

_Different students go to school in different ways in our class, but I like

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Answer 1

【答案】

The Best Way for Me to Go to School

Different students go to school in different ways in our class, but I like to go to school on foot best.

First, I live near the school, so my home is not far from my school. And it takes me a few minutes to get there. Second, there is a crossing on my way to school，and sometimes the traffic is very busy. I think it’s safer to go to school on foot. Third, I think walking is good for my health. It’s a kind of sport and it makes me study better.

So in my opinion, the best way to go to school is on foot. What about you?

【解析】

試題分析：這是一片話題作文。以“The Best Way for Me to Go to School”為題寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀阈哪恐凶詈玫某鲂蟹绞健６涛拈_篇介紹每個人都有自己不同的出行方式，然后交代自己最佳出行方式，要用一半的篇幅來闡述原因。寫作中要注意運(yùn)用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)來描述。注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使行文連貫。

寫作亮點：這篇短文內(nèi)容簡明、扼要地介紹了心目中最好的出行方式。本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練，層次分明，時態(tài)運(yùn)用的非常準(zhǔn)確，復(fù)合句的使用“I think it’s safer to go to school on foot. ”，“I think walking is good for my health.”豐富了文章的表達(dá)效果，對于七年級的學(xué)生來說，能寫出這樣的句式真是難能可貴。