Question

【題目】寫作

中學(xué)生普遍面臨著很多煩惱，請(qǐng)用英語描述下面表格中列出的問題，并提出自己的建議。

煩惱1	整天有做不完的作業(yè)，經(jīng)常熬夜學(xué)習(xí)，無暇顧及個(gè)人愛好；
煩惱2	父母太忙，沒有時(shí)間陪自己；
煩惱3	幾乎沒有親密的朋友可以交流，經(jīng)常感到孤獨(dú)；
煩惱4	對(duì)自己的體重不滿意，不知如何改變；
建議	… …

要求：1、條理清楚，語句通順；

2、80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Answer 1

【答案】

Now, many middle school students face some problems.

Many students have too much homework to do. To finish it, they have to stay up late. So they often feel tired and have no spare time for their hobbies. Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them and they don’t have any close friends to talk to. I think they can talk to their parents and teachers about their problems and ask them for help.

Some other students aren’t happy with their weight. To lose weight and keep fit, they need to do more exercise and eat healthy food.

【解析】

試題分析：：本題的主題是描述問題然后寫出自己的合理化建議。首先應(yīng)該熟讀表格中所列舉的一些問題分析出問題的所在，然后，根據(jù)情況提出自己的合理化建議。在寫作時(shí)，本文的主語可以用第三人稱，時(shí)態(tài)一般應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。應(yīng)該盡量包括文中提示的內(nèi)容，可稍加拓展。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文描述準(zhǔn)確，內(nèi)容比較完整，語言表達(dá)簡(jiǎn)練準(zhǔn)確。使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，比如：Some students feel lonely because their parents are too busy to stay with them。這些內(nèi)容都比較貼合文章的需要，意思也很連貫。