Question

【題目】上個(gè)周末你去了動(dòng)物園參觀。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你的所觀所感，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。

要點(diǎn):1.動(dòng)物園里有很多游客，他們有的在給猴子喂食，有的在和老虎玩耍。

2.動(dòng)物是人類的朋友，我們應(yīng)該善待動(dòng)物。

3.保護(hù)環(huán)境非常重要，動(dòng)物園內(nèi)不要隨地扔垃圾。

4.懂得了保護(hù)動(dòng)物的重要性，因?yàn)楸Ｗo(hù)動(dòng)物就是保護(hù)我們自己。

要求:

1.短文要包括以上要點(diǎn)，不需要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;

2.表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確;

3.70詞左右。

Answer 1

【答案】Last weekend I went to a zoo. There were all kinds of wild animals there. Many visitors enjoyed themselves. Some of them gave food to monkeys, and some of them played with tigers. Animals are our friends. We should be friendly to them. It is also important for us to protect the environment. We mustn't litter in the zoo. Now more and more people know the importance of protecting animals because protecting animals is protecting ourselves.

【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我上周末參觀動(dòng)物園的所觀所感。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問(wèn)題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見(jiàn)句式的應(yīng)用，比如：There were……，Some of them gave food to……，Animals are……，It is also important for us to……，Now more and more people know……等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。