Question

8．假如你是李華．正值平谷舉辦"桃花音樂(lè)節(jié)"之際．邀請(qǐng)你在北京城里某中學(xué)就讀的好朋友-美國(guó)交換生Peter來(lái)平谷參觀．請(qǐng)以"My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu"為話題．用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文．
簡(jiǎn)要介紹平谷，告訴他從北京如何來(lái)平谷，在平谷可以做的事，以及你的希望．
提示詞語(yǔ)：peaches，scenic spots，（Jinhai Lake，Jingdong Big Cave，Jingdong Big Valley，etc．）
concerts，food
提示問(wèn)題：●What's Pinggu famous for？
●How can he come to Pinggu？What can he do here？
●What's your hope？

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇給材料作文，要求以"My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu"為題寫(xiě)一篇短文．寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)是簡(jiǎn)要介紹平谷，告訴交換生Peter從北京如何來(lái)平谷，在平谷可以做的事，以及李華的希望．人稱(chēng)主要為第二人稱(chēng)，時(shí)態(tài)主要為用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．要注意人稱(chēng)和動(dòng)詞的運(yùn)用．
高分句型：
①I(mǎi)t takes you about an hour and a half to get here．到這里需要花費(fèi)你一個(gè)半小時(shí)．
句子考查句型：It takes sb some time to do sth，表示花費(fèi)某人多長(zhǎng)時(shí)間做某事，后面跟to引導(dǎo)的不定式短語(yǔ)，
an hour and a half 一個(gè)半小時(shí)，還可以說(shuō)one and a half hours．
②I think you're sure to like it．我想你一定會(huì)喜歡它的．
I think 后面跟的是一個(gè)that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，這里省略了that，be  sure to do sth一定要做某事，后面跟的是to引導(dǎo)的不定式形式．

解答 My Beautiful Hometown，Pinggu
  Pinggu is famous for its big peaches．There're many，many peach trees．In spring，you can see peach flowers everywhere．We call it"peach flower sea"．In Autumn，you can eat big and sweet peaches．（簡(jiǎn)要介紹平谷）
  Pinggu is not far from your school．You can take No．852or918 bus from Dongzhimen．It takes you about an hour and a half to get here（高分句型）．（如何來(lái)平谷）
 There are many famous scenic spots，such as Jinhai Lake，Jingdong Big Valley，etc．You can visit some of them if you have time．A concert is held every year in spring and then many popular music stars come．I think you're sure to like it．（高分句型）There are also much delicious local food．If you like，you can have a try．（在平谷可以做的事）
I hope you'll come soon and have a good time in my hometown．（祝愿和希望）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文緊扣材料，要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清晰流暢．文中用到了很多短語(yǔ)，如：be famous for，far from，be sure to do，have a good time等等．我們?cè)谄綍r(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)中應(yīng)加強(qiáng)寫(xiě)的訓(xùn)練，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要做到字跡工整，卷面整潔，語(yǔ)言流暢要把文中的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全，做到語(yǔ)句通順，過(guò)渡自然連貫．