Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是學(xué)校的廣播員李華（Li Hua），有學(xué)生來信請你談?wù)劀p輕學(xué)習(xí)壓力和焦慮的方法。

請以“Be Relaxed and Learn Well”為題寫一篇80字左右的校園廣播稿，談?wù)勀愕慕ㄗh。

參考詞匯：減輕壓力reduce stress； 感到焦慮 feel worried；及時(shí) in time

要點(diǎn)：

1. 早睡早起

2. 參加體育運(yùn)動

3. 多交朋友

4. 閱讀有趣的書籍

5. 及時(shí)完成作業(yè)

6. 其他：考生可以表達(dá)更多的觀點(diǎn)。

要求：

1. 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以上所提供的信息及要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2. 廣播稿的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3. 廣播稿中不得透露考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校等信息。

Be Relaxed and Learn Well

Dear schoolmates,

Today I would like to talk about some ways to reduce the stress in our study.

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Have a nice day!

Answer 1

【答案】

Relax and live a Healthy Life

Dear schoolmates,

Today I would like to talk about some ways to reduce the stress in our study.

First, we should get up and go to bed on time. It is important for us to sleep well in order that we can study better next day. Second, we can do more exercise in our spare time. It’s necessary to stay healthy. Third, making friends is a good idea. We can chat with them about our study. Forth, it’s a good way to read some interesting books. We can learn a lot of knowledge from them and it can make us relaxed. Fifth, we’d better finish our homework in time every day，so that we won’t feel worried about it .

What’s more, we can enjoy listening to music.

Have a nice day!

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，注意要點(diǎn)一定齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有一些好的表達(dá)方式如 it’s a good way to read some interesting books；Third, making friends is a good idea。等等。