Question

贛州的夏天，天氣很熱。大街上有很多人，他們穿著涼爽的衣服，有的穿著短褲，有的穿著短裙。有的人步行去購物， 有的人在等公交車。公園里人也很多，人們玩得很高興。 有的在讀書， 有的在打撲克或下象棋。看上去他們都很放松。請(qǐng)根據(jù)上述提示寫一篇短文，對(duì)贛州的夏天作一簡單的描述，不少于60詞(街道street, 等候wait for, 打撲克play cards)。
It’s summer in Ganzhou._________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

It’s summer in Ganzhou.  The weather is very hot.  But there are still many people on the street.  They are all wearing cool clothes.  Some are wearing shorts, and others are wearing short skirts.  Some people are walking to go shopping, and others are waiting for the bus. 
In the park, there are also lots of people.  They are having a good time.  Some of them are reading, some are playing cards, and others are playing chess.  They all look relaxed.

試題分析：本文的寫作非常簡單，以簡單句來表達(dá)所需表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。街上有很多人可以用there are still many people on the street. there be句型來表達(dá)，他們的穿過打扮可以用Some are wearing shorts, and others are wearing short skirts.來表達(dá)，在公園里他們玩的很開心可以用In the park, They are having a good time.來表達(dá)，要表示一些人做什么，另一些人做什么，可以用some…others…,他們都看起來很放松They all look relaxed.
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