Question

10．良好的生活習(xí)慣對我們的成長非常重要．你認為良好的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的？請根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
提示：1．吃得好，才能有健康的身體．
2．必須吃早餐，給身體提供能量．
3．飲食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身體好．
5．參加體育鍛煉，強身健體．
I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．We must also have healthy food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．Exercise will keep us active and strong．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀阏J為的良好的生活習(xí)慣應(yīng)當(dāng)是怎樣的．時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時．人稱主要為第一/三人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點：
1．吃得好，才能有健康的身體．
2．必須吃早餐，給身體提供能量．
3．飲食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身體好．
5．參加體育鍛煉，強身健體．

常用到的重點短語：
keep healthy 保持健康
remember to do sth 記得去做某事
forget to do sth 忘了去做某事
stay up late 熬夜
be bad for 對…不利

【高分句型】
1．①Staying up late at night②is bad for our health．
①動名詞短語做主語，謂語動詞用單數(shù)is．
②be bad for 對…不利
2．①Of course，②it's necessary for us to take exercise．
①of course 當(dāng)然．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth對某人來說做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語，動詞不定式做真正主語．

解答 I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．（吃得好，才能有健康的身體）Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．（必須吃早餐，給身體提供能量）We must also have healthy food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．（飲食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品）．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．【高分句型】（早睡早起身體好）Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．【高分句型】Exercise will keep us active and strong．（參加體育鍛煉，強身健體）

點評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點，動筆前要先認真閱讀要點，然后圍繞要點適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．