Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

文中共有5處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加，刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改5處，多者（從第6處起）不計(jì)分

A group of scientists were planning to go to the countryside to do a scientific research in order to find out that whether the environment of the country had polluted. On arrival , they started to check the air and water. To our surprise , they found how terribly the situation was. They could see the serious pollution. Looking into the cause, they persuade the government to pass the law to protect the environment and kept the balance of nature . Now everything has changed. Birds are singing while trees and grass are waving .

Answer 1

【答案】A group of scientists were planning to go to the countryside to do a scientific research in order

to find out that whether the environment of the country had ∧ polluted. On arrival , they

been

started to check the air and water. To our surprise , they found how terribly the situation was.

Their terrible

They could see the serious pollution. Looking into the cause, they persuade the government to

pass the law to protect the environment and kept the balance of nature . Now everything has

keep

changed. Birds are singing while trees and grass are waving .

【解析】whether the environment of the country had polluted.農(nóng)村的環(huán)境是否已經(jīng)被污染。本句中the environment of the country是動(dòng)作的承受者，故應(yīng)使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)：had been polluted；

文中的To our surprise應(yīng)為To their surprise. To one’s surprise短語(yǔ)中的one’s隨主語(yǔ)的變化而變化，該句中的主語(yǔ)是they故將our改為their；

they found how terribly the situation was.應(yīng)將terribly改為terrible，是因?yàn)樵摼涫切稳菰~作表語(yǔ)而不應(yīng)該使用副詞terribly；

“kept the balance of nature”與“pass the law to protect the environment”是并列的，pass

使用原型，kept也應(yīng)使用原型。故將kept改為keep。