Question

13．向他人表達善意并幫助他人體現(xiàn)了一個人良好的品格．當你向被人表達善意并給他人提供幫助時，你希望得到回報（repay）嗎？針對這一話題，九年級六班的同學們展開了辯論．
假設(shè)你是正方或反方的一員，請圍繞你的觀點，結(jié)合自己的親身經(jīng)歷，說出2至3條理由來說服同學們（只需選擇一方觀點表達即可）．
要求：1．詞數(shù)不少于80詞；
2．文章的開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名．
When I show kindness and help others，I              ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying．
幾天前，當我正在公園散步時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)一個小孩在哭．…ago用于一般過去時，while后跟過去進行時引導時間狀語從句，find sbdoing看到某人正在做某事．
His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused．
他的媽媽如此感謝以至于她想給我買個小禮物，但是我拒絕了．so…that…如此…以至于…，that引導結(jié)果狀語從句．
If you wanted repay，a"Thanks"would be enough．
如果你想要回報，一聲"謝謝"就夠了．與現(xiàn)在事實相反的虛擬語氣，從句用一般過去時，主句用過去將來時．

解答 One possible version：
    When I show kindness and help others，I never expect them to repay me．（選擇一方觀點） In my view，helping others gives me a strong feeling of being needed and brings me happiness．On the other hand，everyone may get into trouble and need help，too．（說明理由）
    Several days ago，while I was having a walk in the park，I found a little boy crying．（高分句型）Then I asked him what was the matter，and he told me he couldn't find his mom．Luckily，he remembered his mother's phone number．So I called her immediately．Ten minutes later，the boy saw his mom and became excited．His mom was so thankful that she wanted to buy me a small gift，but I refused．（高分句型）At that time，I felt quite happy because I did something really good．（舉例）
    All in all，the world needs love and we should be ready to help others without expecting any repay．If you wanted repay，a"Thanks"would be enough．（高分句型）（總結(jié)）

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