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【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

生活中總免不了會(huì)出些意外。作為一名中學(xué)生，除了平時(shí)要做有心人，盡量防止意外的發(fā)生，也應(yīng)當(dāng)掌握一些處理意外的知識(shí)。當(dāng)意外突然發(fā)生時(shí)，該如何處理呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的要點(diǎn)，給校報(bào)英語(yǔ)專(zhuān)欄寫(xiě)一篇80詞左右的短文，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

1．了解一些緊急救護(hù)的電話(huà)和方法

2．當(dāng)發(fā)生意外時(shí)，及時(shí)拔打緊急救護(hù)電話(huà)。

3．清楚告訴對(duì)方發(fā)生的事情和地點(diǎn)

4．保持冷靜，等待救援。

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2．應(yīng)覆蓋所有要點(diǎn)：可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；

3．參考詞匯：emergency services緊急救護(hù) operator（接線(xiàn)員）

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Answer 1

【答案】

There are always some accidents in our life. So it’s very important to know what to do when accidents happen. First we need to know the numbers of the emergency services, such as 120,119 and 122 and some ways to protect ourselves. When an accidents happens, and we can’t deal with it, we should call the numbers of the emergency services for help in time. We should tell the operator clearly what happens, where the place is and which service we need. Then we should keep calm and wait for help. We should try our best to help people in trouble when we seen an accident.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文不使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見(jiàn)該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。如We should try our best to help people in trouble when we seen an accident.等，F(xiàn)irst等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。