Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1題，滿分10分）

你的同學(xué)Tom 由一個(gè)內(nèi)向的變成了一個(gè)很開心，令人喜歡的人，你想知道原因，他告訴了你一下幾點(diǎn)。（80字左右）

內(nèi)容提示：

1. 有空時(shí)候做一些義務(wù)性的工作，幫助的確需要幫助的人，這樣可以交更多的朋友;

2. 每天都對(duì)自己笑一笑, 讓自己感到很自信，別人也開心。

3. 有困難時(shí)候，多跟朋友交流，也要一起分享開心與不開心

4. 他的感受。（自己發(fā)揮）

Now I am very happy and outgoing．I would like to tell you how to be a kind person．

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Answer 1

【答案】

Now I am very happy and outgoing. I would like to tell you how to be a kind person. I often do some voluntary work when I am free at first. I am glad to help people in need. It makes me very happy. At the same time, I smile to myself and my friends. When I smile, I feel I am very confident. In fact, When you have difficulty, you can communicate with your friends or others, and you can find it very necessary and helpful. Besides, you can share your joy and sadness with them. It’s very useful for me to be a happy and friendly boy. I believe you also can be..

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文給出了寫作的提綱，在寫作時(shí)要構(gòu)思好文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，可按照時(shí)間順序來寫，注意要點(diǎn)的齊全。句子要完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化和主謂一致。文中可適當(dāng)使用一些連接詞來加強(qiáng)文章的邏輯性。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰完整，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確流利，要點(diǎn)齊全。文中有許多實(shí)用的表達(dá)方式When I smile, I feel I am very confident. In fact, When you have difficulty, you can communicate with your friends or others, and you can find it very necessary and helpful. Besides, you can share your joy and sadness with them.等等。