Question

5．假設(shè)你是Wei Ming．你曾經(jīng)向Alice傾訴過你的煩惱，她也給你提出了解決問題的辦法和建議．現(xiàn)在，Alice給你來信詢問你的近況．請根據(jù)下面的表格內(nèi)容及Alice的問題，給她寫封回信．

Wei Ming's problems	Alice's advice
My parents give me a lot of pressure about school．	You should talk to your parents．Ask them why they give you so much pressure．
I don't have enough free time．	Life shouldn't just be about grades．Free time activities like sports and hanging out with friends are important，too．
I have to compete with my classmates at school．	You shouldn't compete with your classmates to get better grades．You should all be helping each other to improve．

Alice's questions：
1．Have you talked with your parents？
2．What do you do in your free time？Have you been to anywhere interesting？
3．How are you getting on with your classmates now？
要求：1．回信須包含所有要點內(nèi)容，可適當發(fā)揮．
2．不少于60詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Alice，
Thank you very much for your help．                                             
Yours，
Wei Ming．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：
I told them that I had too much pressure and life shouldn't just be about grades．我告訴他們我的壓力很大，生活不僅僅是成績．that引導的是賓語從句，too much是固定短語，意思是"太多的"修飾不可數(shù)名詞．
高分句型二：
Last week I went to the Yellowstone National Park where I saw many interesting things，especially wild animals．上周，我去了黃石國家公園，在那里我看到了很多有趣的事情，特別是一些野生動物．where引導的定語從句，修飾先行詞Yellowstone National Park．

解答 Dear Alice，
Thank you very much for your help．I have talked with my parents according to your advice．I told them that I had too much pressure and life shouldn't just be about grades．【高分句型一】（告訴家長壓力很大）Every student should have a more colorful life．And the result is good．They begin to understand me better and give me more time to do things I like，such as doing sports and games，listening to music，hanging out with friends．Last week I went to the Yellowstone National Park where I saw many interesting things，especially wild animals．【高分句型二】（外出旅行也是一種很好的放松方式）It was fun．Now I begin to get along with my classmates and when someone of us is in trouble，others will help him or her．We are helping each other and improve together．
Yours，
Wei Ming

點評 首先要仔細閱讀表格中提供的英文信息，在深入理解的基礎(chǔ)上，根據(jù)提示把自己的想法寫出來，注意要緊扣題目的要求．表述的時候可以使用賓語從句，定語從句等較高級的語法結(jié)構(gòu)．