Question

書面表達(dá)（20分）
根據(jù)下列遂寧二中八年級三班學(xué)生上學(xué)方式的調(diào)查表，用英語寫一篇短文。不少于70個單詞。

上學(xué)方式	bus	walking	bike	car
學(xué)生人數(shù)	18	12	25	no
原因，理由	far fron school	good for health near the school	like riding not very far from school	be not allowed (不被允許)to drive car

 

Answer 1

There are fifty-five students in Clss 3,Grade 8 at No.2 Middle School in Suining.
Every day they go to school in different ways. Eighteen students go to school
by bus because they live far from the school. Ten students walk to school.
They think walking is good for health and they live near the school. Twenty-five
students ride their bikes to school because they like riding bikes and their home is not very far from the school. No one goes to school by car because students
are not allowed to drive car to school.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，要求寫一篇介紹一般班級的短文。題目中給出的材料較為詳細(xì)，動筆前應(yīng)根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容組織語言，列出簡單提綱，確定句子的時態(tài)，關(guān)鍵單詞等問題。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱較為復(fù)雜，注意主謂語之間數(shù)的問題。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫出關(guān)鍵單詞。寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。
點(diǎn)評：做英語書面表達(dá)時，只要注意認(rèn)真審題，分析體裁，確定時態(tài)；分析內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，列出一些基本詞匯及詞組；注意表達(dá)的條理性，用好連接詞；為豐富文章的文采，可以多用一些復(fù)合句。最后，注意不要犯語法、句法以及搭配性錯誤，寫好后多讀多修改，我想一定會寫出滿意的文章來。