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3．如今，中學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，壓力大．上周我校學(xué)生對(duì)如何減壓放松進(jìn)行了討論．大家提出了許多種減壓放松的方法．請(qǐng)以How to Get Relaxed 為題，根據(jù)下列信息寫一篇短文．
注意：
（1）短文必須包括以下要點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ǎ?br />（2）詞數(shù)80左右，文章題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
       How to Get Relaxed
Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed．We got a lot of ways to relax．Such as：playing sports； listening to music； seeing films； traveling； communicating with parents and so on．
In my opinion，the best ways to relax is playing sports．Many students stay in the classroom almost the whole day without any exercises，which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue．Therefore，we should exercise everyday．To make a balance between study and sports．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題作文，要求將討論出的減壓方式表述出來(lái)，并發(fā)表自己的看法．首先列出所提供的減壓的方法，然后談?wù)勛约赫J(rèn)為的最好的減壓方法．主要用一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱．表達(dá)上周我們的討論用一般過去時(shí)，表達(dá)我的觀點(diǎn)時(shí)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，寫作過程中，適當(dāng)運(yùn)用連詞使語(yǔ)意連貫．

解答 參考范文：How to Get Relaxed
   Last week we had a discussion about the ways to get relaxed．We got a lot of ways to relax．Such as：playing sports； listening to music； seeing films； traveling； communicating with parents and so on．
    In my opinion，the best ways to relax is playing sports．Many students stay in the classroom almost the whole day without any exercises，which is bad for our health and also makes us feel blue．Therefore，we should exercise everyday．To make a balance between study and sports．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 此題考查圖畫作文．這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如：in my opinion；and so on，還運(yùn)用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句等等．我們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)中多注意總結(jié)，學(xué)會(huì)將所學(xué)轉(zhuǎn)為自己所用，為自己的寫作增光添彩．