Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)（共1小題，滿分20分）

假設(shè)某中學(xué)生英文報(bào)開展關(guān)于計(jì)算機(jī)與學(xué)生生活的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提示的要點(diǎn)，以Computer in my life為題，用英語(yǔ)為該報(bào)寫一篇短文，簡(jiǎn)述計(jì)算機(jī)在你生活中的用途，并就計(jì)算機(jī)對(duì)你生活的影響談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/span>

用途	學(xué)習(xí)	搜集資料；拓展閱讀
	交流	傳遞信息；探討問題
	生活	欣賞音樂；購(gòu)買商品
	其他	（請(qǐng)考生自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）
感受	計(jì)算機(jī)對(duì)你生活的影響（請(qǐng)考生自擬一點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）

1.表達(dá)中必須包含所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯。

2.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

3.表達(dá)中請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)校名和姓名。

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Computer in my life

The computer has become an important part of my life. Usually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading. With the help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss questions with them online. What’s more，I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier. Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed. Moreover，I can take part in some kinds of activities online.

In a word，the computer is really of great help to me. It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要描述電腦的用途，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)運(yùn)用較多。而在寫最后的感受時(shí)，讓學(xué)生發(fā)揮自己的想象力。這讓考生的思維和寫作能力得到了極致的發(fā)揮。當(dāng)然，寫作時(shí)尤要注意文章結(jié)構(gòu)的合理，表述的條理性和準(zhǔn)確性。

溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無(wú)拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：該范文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫。尤為突出之處在短語(yǔ)和句子的巧妙運(yùn)用，如search for；with the help of；not only…but also…；what’s more；Moreover，I can take part in some kinds of activities online等這些短語(yǔ)和句子的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。