Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

根據(jù)提供的信息，寫一篇不少于70詞的信，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Mike 邀請Li Ping參加他這個周日的生日聚會，但Li Ping 的父母出差了(on business)，要到下個月才能回來。奶奶又臥病在床，需要人照顧。而且英語考試即將來臨，因此，無法參加Mike 的生日聚會。Li Ping 感到很抱歉，寫信辭謝。

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to, but I can’t. My parents

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Yours,

Li Ping.

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mike,

Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to, but I can’t. My parents are on business and they can only return next month. My grandmother is sick in bed so I must take care of her. I also have piano lessons this week and lots of homework to do. Besides, our English exam is coming and I must study for it. I want to get a better grade .Therefore I will not be able to go for your party, I am terribly sorry. I hope you will have a good time at your party. Happy birthday to you!

Yours,

Li Ping.

【解析】

試題分析：本文應(yīng)可以用第一人稱，一般將來時態(tài)和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。作者靈活采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。

寫作亮點：本文敘述條理清晰，行文流暢。語言豐富，句式多樣；如：be ill in bed, take care of, have a good time, be coming等；使用了連詞and， so，therefore等，使文章內(nèi)容更加銜接，一氣呵成，效果不錯。