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6．你將來(lái)可能會(huì)有很多錢(qián)，請(qǐng)你以 If I have a lot of money，I will…為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，表述自己擁有財(cái)富后將如何幫助他人．
If I have a lot of money，I will…If I have a lot of money，I will do many things．
I will help the people who are poor．If they have money，they will have nice life．They can buy many things for them．Their sons or daughters can go to school．So they will be happy．So do I．
I will help orphans．I think orphans are very poor．They have lost their fathers and mothers．So they are alone．If I have a lot of money，I will set up an orphanage．So the orphans can live in it happily．
Of course，I will buy something for me．I will buy some books to read．So I can learn a lot of knowlege．Books can open my eyes and make me be a useful person．
If I have a lot of money，I think I will be very happy．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
高分句型一：I will help the people who are poor我會(huì)幫助那些貧窮的人．這是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是people（人們），在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，who是一個(gè)關(guān)系詞，指代先行詞people，同時(shí)，先行詞是指人，who可以替換為that．
高分句型二：So they will be happy．So do I．所以他們會(huì)很高興．我也是．該結(jié)構(gòu)主要用來(lái)說(shuō)明前面所說(shuō)的情況也同樣適用于后面的人或物，意為"…也一樣"．該結(jié)構(gòu)中的助動(dòng)詞 do 根據(jù)前文的情況也可換成 is，am，are，was，were，does，did，can，could 等．

解答 If I have a lot of money，I will do many things．
I will help the people who are poor．（高分句型一：這是一個(gè)由who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是people（人們），在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)，who是一個(gè)關(guān)系詞，指代先行詞people，同時(shí)，先行詞是指人，who可以替換為that．）
 If they have money，they will have nice life．They can buy many things for them．Their sons or daughters can go to school．So they will be happy．So do I．（高分句型二：我也是．該結(jié)構(gòu)主要用來(lái)說(shuō)明前面所說(shuō)的情況也同樣適用于后面的人或物，意為"…也一樣"．該結(jié)構(gòu)中的助動(dòng)詞 do 根據(jù)前文的情況也可換成 is，am，are，was，were，does，did，can，could 等．）
I will help orphans．I think orphans are very poor．They have lost their fathers and mothers．So they are alone．If I have a lot of money，I will set up an orphanage．So the orphans can live in it happily．
Of course，I will buy something for me．I will buy some books to read．So I can learn a lot of knowlege．Books can open my eyes and make me be a useful person．
If I have a lot of money，I think I will be very happy．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本題給出的材料較為簡(jiǎn)略，可發(fā)揮的空間較大，所以自己可以選擇自己比較熟悉的內(nèi)容發(fā)揮，利用自己熟悉的單詞句式等．