Question

6．假設(shè)某美國(guó)教育代表團(tuán)將來(lái)你校參觀訪問(wèn)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示的信息，用英語(yǔ)向外賓簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)校近年來(lái)所發(fā)生的變化，并談?wù)勀愕母邢耄?br />

環(huán)境及設(shè)施	過(guò)去	現(xiàn)在
	至少列舉兩例說(shuō)明過(guò)去情況	操場(chǎng)更大、籃球場(chǎng)更多；圖書(shū)新、品種多； 樹(shù)木四季常青，學(xué)校美如花園…
你的感想	…

注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于90．文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．要點(diǎn)完整、層次清晰、語(yǔ)法正確、上下文連貫．
3．文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名．
Ladies and gentlemen!It's my honor to tell you about the changes to our school．
In the past，there was only a small playground．The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them．The number of the trees and flowers was small．
But things have greatly changed these years．Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts．More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round．
I think it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．We will work harder and serve the people better in the future．
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school．Thank you very much!

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容是向外賓簡(jiǎn)單介紹學(xué)校近年來(lái)所發(fā)生的變化，并談?wù)勀愕母邢耄畷r(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱和第三人稱．
寫(xiě)作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開(kāi)作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開(kāi)作文，即本文的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)：
1環(huán)境及設(shè)施：1）過(guò)去：至少列舉兩例說(shuō)明過(guò)去情況 2）現(xiàn)在：操場(chǎng)更大、籃球場(chǎng)更多；圖書(shū)新、品種多；樹(shù)木四季常青，學(xué)校美如花園…
2你的感想
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)：
there be 有
the number of  …的數(shù)量
as…as 與…一樣
all year around 整年
【高分句型】
1．More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．
can be lent 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)--情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+be+過(guò)去分詞，lend sth to sb 把某物借給某人．
2．Our school is①as beautiful as a garden ②with lots of green trees ③all year round．
①as…as 與…一樣，中間用形容詞或副詞的原形．
②with短語(yǔ)表伴隨．
③all year around 整年
3．I think①②it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．
①think后接上省略了that的賓語(yǔ)從句．
②it is+adj+of sb+to do sth某人做某事是怎么樣的，it是形式主語(yǔ)，動(dòng)詞不定式做真正主語(yǔ)．

解答 Ladies and gentlemen!It's my honor to tell you about the changes to our school．
In the past，there was only a small playground．The books in the library were old and there were only a few kinds of them．The number of the trees and flowers was small．（過(guò)去的狀況）
But things have greatly changed these years．Now we have a bigger playground and more basketball courts．（操場(chǎng)更大、籃球場(chǎng)更多）More different kinds of new books can be lent to us．【高分句型】（圖書(shū)新、品種多）Our school is as beautiful as a garden with lots of green trees all year round．【高分句型】（樹(shù)木四季常青，學(xué)校美如花園）
I think it's lucky of us to have such good studying environment．【高分句型】We will work harder and serve the people better in the future．（我的感想）
I hope you will enjoy your stay in our school．Thank you very much!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 學(xué)生寫(xiě)作時(shí)，如果僅局限在把內(nèi)容交代清楚的水準(zhǔn)上，只選用一些普通的、直截了當(dāng)?shù)脑~，或一律使用簡(jiǎn)單句平鋪直敘，那么，這樣寫(xiě)出來(lái)的文章就會(huì)像一碗白開(kāi)水，呆板、單調(diào)，沒(méi)有可讀性．要使文章耐人尋味、有深度，同學(xué)們就應(yīng)嘗試使用一些高級(jí)詞匯或句型，以凸顯文章的亮點(diǎn)，使文章增添文采，