Question

【題目】書面表達(dá) （本大題共10分）

假如你是Simon, 你購(gòu)買了某公司生產(chǎn)的手機(jī)，但出現(xiàn)故障。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，給該公司售后服務(wù)部寫一封電子郵件。

存在問題	1. 買了兩個(gè)半月。 花了1000多元錢。 2. 上周出現(xiàn)問題。不能發(fā)短信，也不能打電話。 3. 前幾天去店里讓人修理，被告知不值得維修。換新手機(jī)至少等三個(gè)月。
感受和要求	1. I feel… 2. I hope…

注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右。短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2.短文應(yīng)把表格中所示內(nèi)容表達(dá)完整，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整；

3.省略部分作2-3句合理發(fā)揮，使條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，意思連貫。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company.

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Thank you for your attention.

Yours sincerely

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

I am writing to you for the mobile phone by your company.

I have had it for two and a half months. It cost me more than one thousand yuan. But it went wrong last week. I couldn’t send text messages and I couldn’t make phone calls, either. I had it fixed in the shop the other day. I was told that it was not worth fixing. If I want to change a new one, I need to wait for at least three months. I feel sorry that I have bought a mobile phone like this. I hope to have a new one, or I want my money back.

【解析】

試題分析：考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇短文使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。如I was told that it was not worth fixing.等，If等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。