Question

18．假如你是李明，你快初中畢業(yè)了，下星期六你們班級將舉行班會，請你根據(jù)如下內(nèi)容寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勛砸训拇蛩悖畠?nèi)容應(yīng)包括如下要點(diǎn)：
（1）學(xué)好英語，準(zhǔn)備在2012年倫敦奧運(yùn)會（London Olympic Games）期間當(dāng)一名志愿者．
（2）為《21st Century》報(bào)寫文章，報(bào)道有關(guān)中學(xué)生的故事，讓外國朋友了解中國，喜歡中國．
（3）為希望工程做點(diǎn)事，讓貧困兒童有機(jī)會上學(xué)．
（4）升入高中后，更努力學(xué)習(xí)，成為一名優(yōu)秀學(xué)生．
注意：
1、文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名．
2、內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
3、90詞左右（開頭不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Hello，everyone!I'm very glad to tell you something about my plans in the next few years．I think it important for me to learn English well because I hope to be a volunteer for the 2012 London Olympic Games．I want to improve my English and abilities．I'll also write more stories about ourselves for 21^stCentury so that foreign friends will know more about China and care for China．Another plan is that I wanttodosomething for Project Hope．I'll call on people to donate their clothes，stationery and money to Project Hope．I'm going to help poor children have chances to go to school．As for my last plan，I'll work harder at my lessons when I'm at high school．I'll do my best to become a good student．
That's all．Thank you．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文．內(nèi)容是談?wù)勀惝厴I(yè)后的計(jì)劃和打算．時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)．人稱主要為第一人稱．
寫作思路：考生需要首先審清主題，圍繞主題展開作文．
其次考生可從以下幾個(gè)方面展開作文，即本文的寫作要點(diǎn)：
（1）學(xué)好英語，準(zhǔn)備在2012年倫敦奧運(yùn)會（London Olympic Games）期間當(dāng)一名志愿者．
（2）為《21st Century》報(bào)寫文章，報(bào)道有關(guān)中學(xué)生的故事，讓外國朋友了解中國，喜歡中國．
（3）為希望工程做點(diǎn)事，讓貧困兒童有機(jī)會上學(xué)．
（4）升入高中后，更努力學(xué)習(xí)，成為一名優(yōu)秀學(xué)生．
常用到的重點(diǎn)短語：
want to do sth 想要做某事
call on 召集
be going to do 打算做某事
do one's best to do sth 竭盡全力做某事
【高分句型】
1．I think①it important for me to learn English well②because I hope to be a volunteer for the 2012 London Olympic Games．
①it是形式賓語，動詞不定式是真正賓語．
②because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
2．I'll also write more stories about ourselves for 21^st Century so that foreign friends will know more about China and care for China．
so that引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句

解答 Hello，everyone!I'm very glad to tell you something about my plans in the next few years．
I think it important for me to learn English well because I hope to be a volunteer for the 2012 London Olympic Games．【高分句型】（當(dāng)一名志愿者．）I want to improve my English and abilities．I'll also write more stories about ourselves for 21^st Century so that foreign friends will know more about China and care for China．【高分句型】（為《21st Century》報(bào)寫文章）Another plan is that I want to do something for Project Hope．I'll call on people to donate their clothes，stationery and money to Project Hope．I'm going to help poor children have chances to go to school．（（為希望工程做點(diǎn)事）As for my last plan，I'll work harder at my lessons when I'm at high school．I'll do my best to become a good student．（升入高中后，更努力學(xué)習(xí)，成為一名優(yōu)秀學(xué)生）
That's all．Thank you．

點(diǎn)評 這是一篇給材料作文，本文已經(jīng)給出了主要寫作要點(diǎn)，動筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上．語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣．適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．