Question

1．加拿大中學(xué)生Peter在你校學(xué)習(xí)期滿，回國(guó)后寫(xiě)一一封感謝信，同時(shí)指出了同學(xué)們的一些不良行為．假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示給Peter回一封電子郵件．
要點(diǎn)提示：
（1）表示感謝；
（2）表達(dá)意愿（告別高聲喧嘩、亂丟亂扔等不良行為）；
（3）…
要求：
（1）80詞左右．開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
（2）文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．Thank you for telling us so much．I'm very sorry for what we have done．
As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．
I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．You will see a clearer school．
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇應(yīng)用文--感謝信．針對(duì)題干的內(nèi)容可知，首先要對(duì)Peter提出的問(wèn)題表達(dá)感謝；其次針對(duì)Peter提出的問(wèn)題提出若干改正的建議，此時(shí)常用到表達(dá)建議的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should或shouldn't；最后表述自己的學(xué)校會(huì)變好的．

解答 參考范文：Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive your email．Thank you for telling us so much．I'm very sorry for what we have done．As a student，we should learn to have good habits．First，we will keep quiet in public．Also，we will no longer throw things here and there．What's more，we won't  write or draw on the desks and other places，and we will be more polite to others．
I'd like to invite you to visit our school again．You will see a clearer school．
     Best wishes!
Yours，
Li  Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 完成書(shū)面表達(dá)時(shí)要注意文章的連貫性，要求所寫(xiě)文章有邏輯，有條理，不要讓人讀過(guò)之后感到只是若干句子的機(jī)械拼湊．所以會(huì)用到一些連詞，比如：first；also；what's more等．