Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)。

下面是關(guān)于你的新朋友Jack的人物描述，請(qǐng)用 大約70個(gè)英文單詞把你的朋友介紹給大家。

要求：句子連貫通順，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

1、 Jack是一名7年級(jí)3班的學(xué)生，他今年13歲了，就讀于陽光中學(xué)。

2、他戴眼鏡，短發(fā)，個(gè)子高，很強(qiáng)壯。

3、他非常喜歡踢足球，放學(xué)后他經(jīng)常和同學(xué)們一起踢球，他球踢得非常好，他是校足球 隊(duì)的一員。

4、邁克喜歡語文和英語，他擅長英語。他喜歡聽音樂，跑步。周末，他喜歡看足球比賽。他喜歡談?wù)撍�的偶像，貝克漢姆（Beckham）。

5、他希望他可以成為一名足球運(yùn)動(dòng)員，我希望他的夢(mèng)想可以成真。

My new friend

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

My New Friend

I have a new friend. His name is Jack. He is 13 years old. He is a student of Class3, Grade7. He studies at Sunshine Middle School. He wears glasses and he looks tall and strong. He has short hair. He likes playing football very much. He often plays it with his classmates after school. He plays football very well and he is a member of the school football team. He likes Chinese and English. He is good at English. He enjoys listening to music and running. On weekends, he lovees watching football games. He likes to talk about his hero, Beckham. He wants to be a football player one day. I hope his dream can come true.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹我的新朋友Jack。結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結(jié)構(gòu)主要為系表結(jié)構(gòu)和動(dòng)賓結(jié)構(gòu)，注意一些常見句式的應(yīng)用，比如：His name is...，He is...，He likes...，He wants...，I hope...等句式的應(yīng)用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系，注意主謂一致。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了我的新朋友的名字，接下來介紹他的長相和喜好，最后介紹他的夢(mèng)想。此處like doing sth, play football, a member of, be good at, enjoy doing sth, listen to music, on weekends, talk about, want to do sth,come true等這些詞組的運(yùn)用也讓文章增色不少。