Question

【題目】為了取得優(yōu)異的成績(jī)，許多中學(xué)生利用課后時(shí)間努力學(xué)習(xí)，無(wú)法參加任何課外活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是林浩，根據(jù)提示及要求給班主任楊老師寫一封電子郵件，說(shuō)說(shuō)你的想法。

提示：

①為了取得好成績(jī)，我們每天忙于學(xué)習(xí)，幾乎沒有時(shí)間去參加課外活動(dòng)(after-school activity)，一些同學(xué)甚至放棄了自己的業(yè)余愛好；

②有句諺語(yǔ)說(shuō)：只工作不玩耍,聰明的孩子也會(huì)變傻。希望楊老師能鼓勵(lì)我們參加各種活動(dòng)，鍛煉身體。只有放松身心，我們才能更好地投入到學(xué)習(xí)中去。

要求：

①語(yǔ)句通順連貫，條理清晰；

②70詞左右(開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。

Dear Ms. Yang,

To get good grades, we spend most of time studying every day. _______________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope that you can think about my advice. Thank you very much!

Yours,

Lin Hao

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Ms. Yang,

To get good grades, we spend most of time studying every day. We have little time to take part in after-school activities. Some students even give up their hobbies.

As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I hope you can encourage us to take part in different kinds of activities and take more exercise. In this way, our bodies and minds will get relaxed. That is good for our studies.

I hope that you can think about my advice. Thank you very much!

Yours,

Lin Hao

【解析】為了取得優(yōu)異的成績(jī)，許多中學(xué)生利用課后時(shí)間努力學(xué)習(xí)，無(wú)法參加任何課外活動(dòng)。假設(shè)你是林浩，根據(jù)提示及要求給班主任楊老師寫一封電子郵件。審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞被句子連接起來(lái)，這樣文章顯得更連貫。