Question

【題目】作文（10’)

提示：你和朋友打算這個(gè)星期天下午2：00去野營。地點(diǎn)設(shè)在海邊的小公園。那兒人不太多，是個(gè)娛樂的好地方。你想讓你的朋友Bob也參加。3月20日你給Bob寫了一封邀請(qǐng)信。請(qǐng)按照下面的路線，寫信告訴Bob：沿著幸福路往前走，在第二個(gè)拐彎處向右拐，走過橋進(jìn)入河濱路，一直往前走，在紅綠燈處向左拐，就會(huì)看到海邊的小公園。你非常希望他能去。

注：信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)(80字左右)

20th March

Dear Bob,

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Yours sincerely

Simon

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I am glad to invite you to a picnic. We will have the picnic in the small park near the sea at 2：00 pm this Sunday. There are not too many people there and it’s a good place to have fun.

Here is the route to it： Go along Xingfu Road. Take the second turning on the right. Walk across the bridge into Hebing Road. Go straight on and turn left at the traffic lights then you’ll see the small park near the sea.

I hope you can come. We look forward to seeing you.

Yours faithfully

Simon

【解析】

試題分析：這篇短文主要講述了作者在星期天打算和朋友去野營，你想邀請(qǐng)朋友Bob參加，給他交代了地址�？忌�在寫作時(shí)要注意論點(diǎn)清晰及條理清楚。題目已給定大致的觀點(diǎn)，要注意漢譯英的正確性以及不要遺漏觀點(diǎn)，特別注意不要逐條翻譯。

寫作亮點(diǎn)：本篇文章句式的靈活多變。用到一些好的語句如：There are not too many people there and it’s a good place to have fun.；Take the second turning on the right. Walk across the bridge into Hebing Road給文章增色不少。