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3．當(dāng)前，學(xué)生的學(xué)校生活多姿多彩，業(yè)余愛好也豐富多樣．下圖是我們對(duì)某所中學(xué)300名學(xué)生業(yè)余愛好的調(diào)查結(jié)果．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．

要求：（1）必須包括：①調(diào)查結(jié)果②你自己的愛好、選擇的原因及帶來的益處．
（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名或人名．
（3）詞數(shù)80～100（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．
Many students have hobbies．Here is the result of the survey about what 300students usually do in their free time．Many students have hobbies．Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do in their free time．Nearly half of the students like music，and a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports on weekends，twenty percent enjoy reading books．A few students like collecting things they like，such as stamps，coins and so on．Few students have other hobbies．
As for me，I prefer listening to music．Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study．Sometimes I listen to English songs．I can learn English words or phrases from them．It really improves my English a lot．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表作文．內(nèi)容為根據(jù)圖表中對(duì)某所中學(xué)300名學(xué)生業(yè)余愛好的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇文章．內(nèi)容用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第三人稱復(fù)數(shù)形式和第一人稱．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．根據(jù)圖表描述調(diào)查的結(jié)果；2．自己的愛好、選擇的原因及帶來的益處．常用到的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：half of…，a quarter of…，a few，few，sb．spend sometime doing sth．，prefer doing sth．

解答 Many students have hobbies．Here is the result of the survey about what 300 students usually do in their free time．Nearly half of the students like music，and a quarter of them usually spend their time playing sports on weekends，twenty percent enjoy reading books．A few students like collecting things they like，such as stamps，coins and so on．Few students have other hobbies．
As for me，I prefer listening to music．Because it can give me pleasure when I'm unhappy and make me relaxed after hard study．Sometimes I listen to English songs．I can learn English words or phrases from them．It really improves my English a lot．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是圖表類作文中的餅狀圖作文．該類作文首先要突出重點(diǎn)，抓住圖表中的極端點(diǎn)，如：最大或最��；圖表往往提供大量數(shù)據(jù)，考生應(yīng)該仔細(xì)觀察分析，從中選擇有效信息，圖表上資料、數(shù)據(jù)的描述必須選擇重點(diǎn)；說明、描述圖表時(shí)應(yīng)該注意動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)，屬于過去發(fā)生的應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí)，屬于經(jīng)常發(fā)生的應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；應(yīng)該熟練掌握一些固定句型和表達(dá)方式，并要將這些表達(dá)練熟，不要出錯(cuò)．